Until Messinger fell from the sky, the day had not been good to
Francisco. The cold and damp January wind had bullied his boat, the Augustin y Rosa, upon the surface of the
water, and more than anything, he wanted to return to shore and follow the sand
and gravel path that led to his picayune home overlooking the sea, where he
wished to hide behind its walls and escape the chill that had settled in his
body over the course of the morning. Worst of all, he was pulling in empty
nets. It was as if the fish had all decided to leave the Mediterranean.
Though he doubted the fishing would improve, he was determined to
stay on the water longer, until he had something to show for his efforts. At
times like this, with a forceful wind blowing, Francisco would huddle low in
the boat, his arms crossed, and his slicker pulled tight around his shoulders.
He could stare at the sea for hours, the rhythmic slap of water against the bow,
lulling him into a meditative state. Sometimes his thoughts would turn to home,
his wife, his children, but more often his thoughts ceased entirely, his mind
becoming as open and empty as the horizon.
It was out of this emptiness that the distant hum of jet engines
emerged. The sound grew above him, but he didn’t take note of it until it was directly
overhead, loud and droning. Everyone in his village was used to the sound of
the American planes that cut endlessly back and forth across the sky en route
to and from Morón Air Base. Initially
the noise had been an annoyance. Now, no one ever mentioned it. Francisco didn’t
bother to look up. Whatever was up there wasn’t worth the effort.
From the sky came a sudden sound that
started sharp and small, like the cracking of a whip. A second later, it exploded
across the surface of the sea, like millions of oars striking the water in
unison. The boat rocked violently and Francisco grasped the sides in a startled
panic. He steadied himself and fearfully looked up. Above him, something like
Moses’ flaming pillar had appeared; fire and smoke suspended in the air. The black
cloud flashed briefly and then dissipated into a shower of debris. In the
smoke, Francisco spotted the form of a plane. It hovered, like a bird caught in
a headwind, and then began to come apart, wings and fuselage torn asunder. The
different pieces fell toward the earth. It occurred to Francisco that one of
the burning chunks of jet might even fall on him, and he thought of moving his
boat. But instead he remained transfixed on the storm of flaming airplane pieces
raining down upon the earth and sea around him.
As he watched, a parachute opened, and
he was startled to think that a human was up there in the sky amidst all the
smoke and fire. Soon, another parachute opened, and finally a third. The
initial explosion had resounded across the water briefly, but now everything
was quiet. The air above him was filled with silent activity; falling people
and jagged objects. He saw it all with detached curiosity, as if the sky were a
giant silver screen at the cinema. The spectacle unfolding high above him
seemed in no way related to his world; the village of Palomares, his humble boat, the sea.
The men will fall into the sea. This thought
suddenly shook him. The men will fall
into the sea. They will drown.
There was no internal deliberation. He
did not make a decision to help, but rather, very suddenly, knew he would help. He watched for a
moment longer, his senses heightened, carefully noting to himself the locations
on the horizon where the men and objects met the water. Two of the men glided
toward the shore, but the third was carried by a gust of wind in the opposite
direction. Francisco followed the trajectory of the third parachute until it dipped
below the horizon, splashing into the water out of view. With that, Francisco turned
the Augustin y Rosa out to sea.
He spotted the parachute first, floating
like a massive jellyfish on the water. Just beyond it, the bobbing head of a
man. As Francisco approached, the man began weakly waving his arms. Francisco
waved back, killed the boats small outboard motor, and put an oar in the water
to guide the boat closer.
“Estás bien?” Francisco called out to the man.
From the water, the man said, “Thank
you, thank you. Thank God.”
The man was cold. He had been
in the water for nearly an hour. His skin was pale and his voice trembled as he
spoke. Francisco paddled his boat close, and then reached over the side and
gripped the collar of the man’s flight suit and tugged. The man tried to help,
reaching out and attempting to clutch the edge of the boat, but his hands had
been rendered useless by the frigid water.
“No, no. Relájese señor.” Francisco said.
He wedged
a foot beneath a plank in the interior wall of the boat and using his full
body-weight, pulled hard. He fell backward, dragging the man up out of the water.
They both collapsed in a pile at the bottom of the boat.
“Usted va a estar bien.” Francisco said. He patted the man on the shoulder.
The man cried out with a wail
that could have signaled both agony and relief. Francisco placed a hand on him,
letting it rest there, and then began to rub the man’s shoulders, pressing hard
against the wet clothing, the same way he rubbed the arms and legs of his
children to warm them when they shivered with cold.
“Thank you. Thank you.” The man repeated.
Francisco did not understand
English, but he felt the man’s gratitude. He wrapped his arms around the man
and heaved his body toward the stern of the boat, where he gently propped the
man’s head on a pile of empty fishing nets. He had caught only one thing that day;
a man, fallen from the sky.
There was a badge on the man’s
shirt. Francisco guessed that the word stitched on it might be the man’s name.
“May-seen-hair.” He
said, trying to pronounce the word. He pointed at the badge and repeated the
word. “May-seen-hair.”
“It’s my name.” The man
managed to say. “Larry Messinger.”
Francisco nodded in acknowledgement.
He moved carefully past Messinger and made his way back to the onboard motor. He
yanked on the chord and very soon they were on their way back to the village. Along
the way, neither man spoke. Messinger remained curled up on the fishing nets,
using Francisco’s slicker and a shield from the wind.
As Francisco steered the boat,
his thoughts returned to his home and family. They would have heard the
explosion in the sky; possibly even seen it. He knew they would be proud of him
when he returned with Messinger in his boat. He could imagine his wife’s face.
It was a good day to be a
fisherman.
* * * *
To learn more about the real Francisco Simo Orts, Larry Messinger and the 1966 Palomares B-52 crash, read the original Wikipedia article HERE
this one wasn't as strong--just a retelling of the story rather than a reimagined interpretation although i loved that you used spanish here when they talked. we've talked about this before, about how to translate two foreigners speaking to each other and i think you pull that off well here. but yeah, this was kind of a weak prompt so i can see why you had difficulty doing something creative with it. davehong
ReplyDeletei said it before, but i think you are strongest at least for me when you describe everyday events rather than fantastical ones. it comes off a little prosaic.
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