Dr. Finks was standing at the whiteboard, his back to the students. She caught the door with her elbow, slowing it and allowing it to close silently behind her. In the back row, Terrance saw her and flashed a mock look of disgust. She smiled and shrugged and glided soundlessly to an open seat at the end of the third row.
“This is
reinforced when Red Sammy’s wife say ‘it
isn’t a soul in this green world of God’s that you can trust.’” Dr. Finks
read from a frayed and creased paperback in his hand, his voice dipping into a
low and exaggerated southern accent. As he turned back toward the class, he
spotted Erica digging through her backpack. She glanced up just in time to meet
his gaze.
“Miss Brown,
you made it to class.” He said, interrupting his lecture.
Erica
straightened in her seat. “Sorry. My alarm…” She started to say, but trailed
off and finally gave up and looked down at her desk.
“I don’t
mean to embarrass you. It’s just that today’s assignment was due at the
beginning of class. Is yours in the stack?” He asked, gesturing toward a sloppy
stack of papers at the corner of the teaching desk.
Erica dug
into her bag again and retrieved a few stapled pages. “Can I give it to you
now?” She asked.
Dr. Finks
nodded. “Bring it up.”
Erica darted
toward the desk, her eyes focused on the classroom floor. As she neared the
front, Dr. Finks stepped up and reached for her paper. Erica tried awkwardly to side-step him, but
he intercepted her. She handed him the paper and quickly turned and returned to
her seat.
Dr. Finks
walked to the desk and laid the paper on top of the stack. He looked down at
it, frozen, and then placed his hand on it. He flipped over the first page, silent. The room was quiet except for the small sounds that fill a classroom.
“Miss Brown,
did you realize these pages are blank?” He asked. He had placed the paperback
on the desk and was now slowly turning the pages of her paper.
“They’re sort of blank.” Erica said. She cleared
her throat. “Did you see the title?”
Dr. Finks
flipped back to the first page.
“It says ‘Six Pages’ by Erica Brown.”
“Right.”
Erica said.
“But the
rest of the pages are blank.” He said, holding the paper up for her to see.
“It’s…um…sort
of experimental.” She said, cocking her head a bit, trying to be cute.
“Hmm.
Experimental in what way? Are you experimenting with invisible ink?” A few students laughed nervously. Dr. Finks
was showing.
“Have you
ever heard of John Cage?” Erica asked.
“Which John
Cage?” Dr. Finks said. “That’s a rather commonplace name.”
“The
composer. He wrote a song called 'four-minutes and thirty-three seconds'.”
Dr. Finks
stared above the students' heads, as if reading John Cage’s biography off the
back wall of the classroom.
“The silent
composition?” Dr. Finks asked.
Erica
nodded. Then she said, “But it’s not exactly silent. At least, that wasn’t his
point. What he really wanted was for people to use four minutes and
thirty-three seconds to listen to the ambient noise in the room where the piece
is being played. It’s like an opportunity to listen for musicality in the world
around us.” She was leaning in, excitement growing in her face as she
explained.
“Ah.” Dr.
Finks said. He lifted the paper high for the entire class to see. “On these
blank pages you’re testing the same experiment in a different medium? Is that
correct?”
“Correct.”
Erica said.
“And the
desired outcome is…?” He said, shrugging his shoulders.
“My hope is
–“ Erica started, but then she stopped and looked at the wall and then down at
her own hands. “You know, I was just thinking that whoever reads this would
bring their own experience to it. It creates a different experience for every
person.”
Behind her,
a student laughed. A few more giggles sounded around the room.
“That’s the
response I’m trying hard to suppress myself.” Dr. Finks said.
“Everyone
has a story, right? We say that all the time. So, this gives anyone who reads
it a chance to see their own story.” Erica said. She looked around the
classroom, trying to garner support from her classmates.
They weren’t sympathetic.
They weren’t sympathetic.
“Interesting.”
Dr. Finks said, returning the paper to the pile. “We’ll need to discuss this
after class. I don’t think I can accept blank pages for this assignment.”
Forty
minutes later, Erica packed her bag and sat quietly while the classroom
emptied. Terrance touched her on the shoulder as he left. “Good luck.” He said.
A preppy
looking boy wearing a red and blue striped sweater had a question to ask Dr.
Finks. They spoke with one another in hushed tones while Erica waited
patiently. When the boy left, Erica stood and walked slowly to the front.
“Do I need
to write a real essay?” She asked.
“Yes, you
do.” Dr. Finks said. He picked up the stack of papers and inserted them into
his briefcase. “Unless you’re willing to make a deal.”
Erica
stiffened.
“What I mean
is, if you’re willing to complete a second assignment, I’ll give you a passing
grade on this one.”
Erica
relaxed a bit. She said. “OK. What’s the assignment?”
Dr. Finks
smiled. “I would like you to write another essay inspired by the work of the
composer John Cage.”
“Oh. Okay.”
She said.
“I would
like you to familiarize yourself with a piece of music titled ‘A-S-L-S-P’.”
“A-S-L…”
Erica tried to repeat it back.
“A-S-L-S-P.”
He said.
She pulled a
notebook from her backpack and used a pink gel pen to write down the letters.
“Got it.
When is it due?”
“It’s due at
the beginning of class each morning for the rest of the semester.”
“What?” She asked.
“Look it up.
You’ll know what to do.” He said.
The next
morning, Erica turned in the first page of her new assignment. She arrived
earlier than usual. Dr. Finks hadn’t arrived. Before taking her seat, she laid
a single sheet of paper on the desk at the front. On the paper was the word Time. Except for her name and the date,
the rest of the page was blank. The next day, she turned in the word is. The following Monday she turned in a
sheet of paper with the word not.
As agreed
upon, she continued turning in the ASLSP
papers each morning for the rest of the semester. Each day, when Dr. Finks
retrieved the paper from his teaching desk, he would acknowledge her in some
way. A smile, a nod. By the end of the semester, she had completed four
sentences. On the last day of class, she personally handed him the last sheet
of paper. On it was written the word future,
followed by a period.
To learn more about ASLSP, read the original Wikipedia article HERE.
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To learn more about ASLSP, read the original Wikipedia article HERE.
i loved it. i'm not sure the point of these exercises other than fire your creative mind but i thought it was kind of a nice riff off the original story and made me as a reader more curious to learn more about the actual piece of music. it's kind of like a well written and crafted advertising piece. maybe you've got a future writing copy!
ReplyDeleteanyhow, i liked how the ending was vague. we don't know if she took this seriously, we don'tknow if she went home after the first day and carefully calculated how many days she had left and then crafted the perfect story or not. but we get a sense that the teacher is trying to teach her something about art. she came in bsing some story and he forced her to really confront it more personally. excellent story. dave hong